Could you correct my diary?
A couple days ago I went to a appliance shop where is near my work place to see new one after working.
I found nice one and I had the one keep.
Now I'm on my way to the shop and regretting to have bought it there because it is my day off, what is worse, it takes 50 minuites from my place to the shop.
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Could you correct my diary?
A couple days ago I went to a appliance shop where is near my work place to see new one after working.--> A couple of days ago, I went to an appliance shop near my workplace. (「to see new one after working」について意味がよく分からない）
I found nice one and I had the one keep.
(Sorry, I don't understand this part either)
Now I'm on my way to the shop and regretting to have bought it there because it is my day off, what is worse, it takes 50 minuites from my place to the shop.
--> I regret buying it because it was my day off. And to make matters worse, it takes me 50 minutes to walk from my place to the shop.
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Could you correct my diary?
A couple days ago I went to an appliance shop where is near my work place to see a new one after working.*I found nice one and I had the one keep.*
Now I'm on my way to the shop and regretting to have That I bought it there because it is my day off, what's worse is it takes 50 minuites from my place to the shop.
* Im not sure what you are trying to say here*
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