Can you correct my essay ? thank you. 2017/11/13 argument
Today is the fourth day I write notebook entry in Italki , I will do it in the future.
I find many new in today's China will arouse people's argument. For example, today I saw the news , a chinese girl was killed in Tokyo Japan , just at the door of hear deparment. The killer is the ex-boy friend of the classmate who live with in the department. The classmate did not open the door until the policeman came , at that time ,the girl has dead.
This aroused big argument in China ,should the classmate assumed liabilties because the killer is to payback the classmate.
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Can you correct my essay ? thank you. 2017/11/13 argument
Today is the fourth day I have written a notebook entry in Italki , I will continue to do it in the future.I find that many news stories in China will arouse arguments. For example, I saw in the news today , a chinese girl was killed in Tokyo Japan , at her apartment door. The killer was the ex-boyfriend of her roommate. She did not open the door until the police came , by then the girl was dead
This aroused a big argument in China ,should the classmate assume liability because the killer was trying to get revenge on the roommate.
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Can you correct my essay ? thank you. 2017/11/13 argument
Today is the fourth day I'll write in my notebook entry for Italki , I will continue to do so in the future.I find many things in the Chinese news that will arouse emotion from people watching. For example, today I saw a report where a Chinese girl was killed in Tokyo, Japan , just at the door of her apartment. The killer is the ex-boy friend of a classmate who lived in the apartment. The classmate did not open the door until the policemen came . The girl has since died.
This provoked conversation around China ,should the classmate assume liability because the killer was once the boyfriend of the classmate?
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