Nostalgia
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Over the years, she had learned to see reality through a distorting prism. However, even the toughest buildings have cracks sometimes...She remembered these words that made her laugh at the time “Nostalgia is like sunburn, it doesn't hurt during, it hurts in the evening”. She smiled, painfully, and she moved on.
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Nostalgia
Hello! I would like to know if the English is correct ? Thanks for your help :)Over the years she had learned to see reality through a distorting prism. However, even the toughest buildings have cracks sometimes ... She remembered these words that made her laugh at the time “Nostalgia is like sunburn, it doesn't hurt during, it hurts in the evening”. She smiled, painfully, and (she) moved on.
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