Diary in English ♡ On the 12th of Nov.
I woke up at 11 am today and had some toast and a cup of tea for breakfast. After I took a shower, I got changed, put on make up and went shopping to city center. There was a Christmas market and the atmosphere made me happy. I walked around there. Then I bought a pair of pants, a jumper and some socks. I was tired to walk so much. I was thinking whether I should buy a new outer to go to the Baltic states because it must be below zero! But the outer was expensive and I couldn't decide to buy it. When I talked about it to my host mother, she suggested me to check some charity shops. I thought it was a good idea because my teacher said we sometimes can find out a good item because some rich people donate some really good items to a shop!
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Diary in English ♡ On the 12th of Nov.
I woke up at 11 a.m. today and had some toast and a cup of tea for breakfast. After I took a shower, I got changed, put on make up and went shopping to at the city center. There was a Christmas market and the atmosphere made me happy. I walked around there and then I bought a pair of pants, a jumper and some socks. I was tired to walk after walking so much. I was thinking about whether I should buy a new outer coat to go to the Baltic states because it must be below zero there! But the outer coat was expensive and I couldn't decide whether or not I should to buy it. When I talked about it to with my host mother, she suggested to me to that I check some charity shops. I thought it was a good idea because my teacher said we can sometimes can find out a good item because some rich people donate some really good items to a shop!1
Diary in English ♡ On the 12th of Nov.
I woke up at 11 am today and had some toast and a cup of tea for breakfast. After I took a shower, I got changed, put on make up and went shopping to city center. There was a Christmas market and the atmosphere made me happy. I walked around then I bought a pair of pants, a jumper and some socks. I was tired from walking so much.I was thinking whether I should buy a new outer to go to the Baltic states because it's most likely below zero! But the outer was expensive and I decides not to buy it. When I talked about it with my host mother, she suggested I check some charity shops. I thought it was a good idea because my teacher said we sometimes can find a good deal because sometimes rich people donate quality clothes!
Sorry I am not sure if an "outer" is slang for some kind of coat?
Fantastic job on the essay otherwise!
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Diary in English ♡ On the 12th of Nov.
I woke up at 11 am today and had some toast and a cup of tea for breakfast. After I took a shower, I got changed, put on make up and went shopping to at the city center. There was a Christmas market and the atmosphere made me happy. I walked around there that area. Then I bought a pair of pants, a jumper and some socks. I was tired to from walking so much. I was thinking whether I should buy a new outer (coat? jacket?) to go to the Baltic states because it must be below zero there! But the outer (coat? jacket?) was expensive and I couldn't decide whether or not to buy it. When I talked about it to my host mother, she suggested me to that I check some charity shops. I thought it was a good idea because my teacher said we sometimes can find out a good item at a charity shop because some rich people donate some really good items to a shops!0
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It sounds like you had a good day today! Usually in American English we would say "jacket" or "coat," not "over."
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