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Online Shopping Today, because of the development of internet technology, people can complete lots of works at home. Although some stores have been closed, I would agree that online shopping have some positive impact on people's daily lives.

Many people lose employment, because many shops have to reduce their budget and cut lots of employees off. Online shops have enormous advantage compared to local shops. These online shops do not need separate areas or places for displaying goods, and employees, becuase all their processes can be done on the internet. For instance, many young people are more likely to purchase books and clothes on famous shopping websites rather than go to a store on the street since they are too busy to shopping in malls. Many local markets have to been closed or enven to change their business models.

Online shopping impose many opportunities to young student to put their ideas into practice as there are many websites offer free spaces for those without sufficent money. For example ,many young students start their business using internet technology to sell products, and also receive sufficient supports from their school career office. In addition, many governments encourage the citizens to build their business, and online shops are easy to some beginners. Many young student can earn much more money at school and also acquire business knowledge at a early age, which can significantly boost the economy. Besides, many people are self employed and the society will be more stable.

To sum up, although online shopping imposes some people into unemployment, it also provides more opportunities to those who want to run a business. I would agree that online shopping have a positive effect on our economy.

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Thanks for your support. Governments should also establish some laws to help us avoid to get the fake and lower quality products.
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Hi Xiomy, I'm Bryan, from Lima - Perú, I'm totally agree with your post, for a lot of us these kind of businesses are the best way to make money, only buy and sell as much product as our market demands. Regards, Bryan

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