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Composition When the war stated, my brothers and my fhater were called fot the French army to fight with them. My mother and I stayed alone in our house in Paris for three years. One morning, a letter came to us. My father and my brothers had died. The same day, the Germany army bombed Paris so my mother and I fled to a cabin in the Woods far away of the city. Living there was an experience that I will never forget. Our cabin was small and cold, but it was as safe as a castle because anyone knew his existence. We lived there three years. We hunted birds and we recolected plants to eat. At night we used to see the stars into the tres and we dreamt with the end of the war.However, the sky spoke for itself: there were bombings nwarly every day. I remember that we lived without fear, but one day the Germany army entered into the Woods. We listened them, quickly we run away and after a few minutes there were not evidence of our presence. I must say the destinity gave us another chance to live, because the soldiers didn't see our hiding place. One year after, the sky started to be more appeared and we decide came back to Paris. When we arrived the city was as destroyed as our life. At least the war had finished...

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When the war started, my brothers and my father were called to fight for the French Army. My mother and I stayed alone in our house in Paris for three years. One morning, a letter came to us; My father and my brothers had died. The same day, the German army bombed Paris so my mother and I fled to a cabin in the Woods far away from the city.
Living there was an experience that I will never forget. Our cabin was small and cold, but it was as safe as a castle because nobody knew of its existence.
We lived there three years. We hunted birds and we collected plants to eat. At night we used to see the stars into the trees and we dreamt for the end of the war.  However, the sky spoke for itself; there was bombings nearly every day.
I remember that we lived without fear, but one day the German army entered into the Woods. We listened to them, and we quickly ran away and after a few minutes there was no evidence of our presence. I must say that destiny gave us another chance to live, because the soldiers didn't see our hiding place.
One year after, the sky started to clear and we decide came back to Paris. When we arrived the city was as destroyed as was our life.
At least the war had finished...

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