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Day 8 (Could someone please correct my grammar) what's up everyone! Today I will talk about aleatory things I sleep everyday at 10pm and I wake up at 6pm to going to school. I want to meet other countries but I have very fear of airplane. It is very safe but I have fear to fly. I think that to fly is for birds. Do you have fear to fly? Yes, I do! Yesterday, I went to watch my Flamengo soccer team in estádio Ilha do Urubu (Vulture Island stadium) from Rio de Janeiro. I'm from Brasília and I had to travel more than 900 miles to Rio de Janeiro to watch Flamengo game.

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Day 8 (Could someone please correct my grammar)

What's up, everyone!
Today I will talk about random things
I go to sleep every day at 10 pm, and I wake up at 6 am (I'm correcting this to am because I'm assuming you don't go to school at night) to go to school.
I want to travel to other countries, but I have a very big fear of airplanes. They are very safe, but I'm afraid to fly. I think that flying is for birds.
Are you afraid to fly? I am!
Yesterday, I went to watch my Flamengo soccer team in estádio Ilha do Urubu (Vulture Island stadium) from Rio de Janeiro. I'm from Brazil, and I had to travel more than 900 miles to Rio de Janeiro to watch the Flamengo game.
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Day 8 (Could someone please correct my grammar)

what's up everyone!
Today I will talk about random things
I go to bed everyday at 10pm and I wake up at 6am (in the morning) to going to school.
I want to travel to other countries but I have very fear of flying. It is very safe but I have a fear of flying  . I think that to fly is for birds. (Or I think that flying is for birds.)
Do you have a fear to fly (fear of flying)?  Yes, I do!
Yesterday, I went to watch my Flamengo soccer team in estádio Ilha do Urubu (Vulture Island stadium) from Rio de Janeiro. I'm from Brasília and I had to travel more than 900 miles to Rio de Janeiro to watch Flamengo game.

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