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words without sense The world in wich we live is so confuse. I don´t understand nothing but no matter. I´m not a children but I would wish to go back to play with my toys for a entire afternoon...without worries, no problems and laugh, runing around the garden to save the world of the evil. When we are children the world was fantastic, wonderful, our eyes shone...I was happy. Now I´m a man who can´t understand the world. I´m no special, many people feel same way. I´m getting older, my mother want to grandchildren but I wan´t, first, I wish to learn to love the world again. All is in our mind, the land where we lives is the same ever. I´m a bit shy maybe, my mind is not the same when was children.

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words without sense

The world in which we live is so confusing. I don´t understand anything but it doesn't no matter. I´m not a children but I would wish to go back to playing with my toys for an entire afternoon...without worries, no problems and laugh, running around the garden to save the world of from the evil. When we are were children the world was fantastic, wonderful, our eyes shone...I was happy. Now I´m a man who can´t understand the world. I´m not special, many people feel the same way. I´m getting older, my mother wants to grandchildren but I wan´t, first, I wish to learn to love the world again. All that is in our mind, the land where we lives  is the never the same.  I´m a bit shy maybe, my mind is not the same when I was a children.


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thanks for reading my text and comment :)
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Your words do have sense, yes it is not a beautiful world but we saw it beautiful when we were children.

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