A report about exchange programme (CAE writing task)
Dear All,
Could you please share your opinion about a piece of writing below? It is a report and as far as I am not very good with reports, I would really appreciate any suggestions and criticism. Thank you very much!
Introduction
The aim of this report is to tell about an exchange programme in which I recently took participation. The programme contained two main parts. Two months ago, a person from another country had stayed in my flat for a week. Ten days after that, I travelled to his country and had been his guest for one week too. In order to provide an objective picture, this report also comprises my partner's impression. (NB: if "comprises" does not work here, please tell me which word I could use here except for "include" :) )
My travel
My partner (his name is John) is living in a picturesque village near mountains. For the whole week, I was enjoying breathtaking sights, fresh air, and fishing. Taking into consideration that I am living in a huge megapolis, I was elated at the change to spend several days in such a calm and quiet place. John was utterly friendly and put a lot of efforts to make my staying comfortable
My partner's experience
Contrary to me, John longed to visit a big city as "he had tired of living in the middle of nowhere' (it is a citation). The activities he was involved in were totally opposite to mine. We attended several theatrical performances, visited a concert of his famous band, which happened to come to our city in the time of his visit. But according to his words, the most memorable and fulfilling experience was a football game between two rival teams. He was happy to soak up the atmosphere of the derby.
General impression
In conclusion, I would like to say that not only did our impression meets our expectations, but they were even exceeded. I am delighted with the result and will definitely recommend my friends to participate in the programme.
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A report about exchange programme (CAE writing task)
Dear All,Could you please share your opinion about a piece of writing below? It is a report and as far as I am not very good with reports, I would really appreciate any suggestions and criticism. Thank you very much!
Introduction
The aim of this report is to tell about an exchange programme in which I recently participated. The programme contained two main parts. Two months ago, a person from another country had stayed in my flat for a week. Ten days after that, I travelled to his country and had been his guest for one week too. In order to provide an objective picture, this report also comprises my partner's impression. (NB: if "comprises" does not work here, please tell me which word I could use here except for "include" :) )
My travel
My partner (whose name is John) was living in a picturesque village near mountains. For the whole week, I was enjoying breathtaking sights, fresh air, and fishing. Taking into consideration that I had been living in a huge metropolis, I was elated at the change to spend several days in such a calm and quiet place. John was utterly friendly and had put a lot of efforts to make my stay comfortable.
My partner's experience
Contrary to me, John longed to visit a big city as "he had [become] tired of living in the middle of nowhere" (it is a quotation). The activities he was involved in were totally opposite to mine. He attended several theatrical performances, visited a concert of his favourite band, which happened to come to my city during his visit. But, according to his words, the most memorable and fulfilling experience was a football game between two rival teams. He was happy to soak up the atmosphere of the derby.
General impression
In conclusion, I would like to say that not only did our impressions meet our expectations, but they were even exceeded. I was delighted with the result and would definitely recommend my friends to participate in the programme.
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