Could you correct my diary? It had started my new job! I’m expecting that some nice things might be happened! But today, the first day of work, I haven’t served any services to customers in English.

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Could you correct my diary? It had started my new job! I’m expecting that some nice things might be happened! But today, the first day of work, I haven’t served any services to customers in English.... It’s so disappointing!

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Could you correct my notebook entry?

I've just started my new job! I was expecting that some nice things might have happened, but today... on the first day of work, I haven’t had the opportunity to serve any customers in English yet.... It’s so disappointing!

Corresponding to exactly what you wrote (Simple):

Can you correct my diary?

I have started my new job!
I expected some nice things to happen, but I didn't serve any customers in English today...
It was so disappointing!

Optimum correction (Best):

Can you please correct my diary?

I've just started my new job!
I was expecting some nice things to happen, but I haven’t managed to serve any customers in English today...
It was so disappointing! (I think using the word 'embarrassing' would be more appropriate, but only if it suits what happened to you during work.)

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