Letter to Teacher
周老师,
您好。上个星期我看了课本，但是考的很难，所以我想问您几个问题。请问，您下个星期二下午有空儿吗？我星期一星期三四点半有课。
-(My name)
My intention:
Mr. Zhou,
Last week, I read the textbook, but the quiz was hard. Thus, I want to ask you a few questions. Do you have time next Tuesday afternoon? I have class on Monday and Wednesday at 4:30.
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Letter to Teacher
给周老师的信
您好。上个星期我看了课本，但可是小测验考的很难，所以我想问您几个问题。请问，您下个星期二下午有空儿吗（也可以说有时间吗）？我星期一和星期三的下午四点半有课，不方便。
-(My name)
My intention:
Mr. Zhou,
Last week, I read the textbook, but the quiz was hard. Thus, I want to ask you a few questions. Do you have time next Tuesday afternoon? I have class on Monday and Wednesday at 4:30.
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Letter to Teacher
周老师,您好。上个星期我看了（复习了）课本，但是考的（考试）很难，所以我想问您几个问题。我星期一星期三四点半有课。请问，您下个星期二下午有空儿吗？
1. 看了 vs 复习了： When talking about test/quiz, we normally say 复习 instead of 看。 看is more general，复习means study for／review
2. 空儿：Usually, we don't put "儿“ on writing.
3. The order of the last two sentences: We normally state the reason first.
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My question is: why are you saying you have class on Monday and Wednesday at 4:30? If it's the reason you want to meet on Tuesday, then:
1.In Chinese, we usually explaing the reason first and state the action. I would say" 我星期一星期三有课。请问您星期二下午有空吗？（空的后面通常不会加“儿”，and normally we don't put "儿“ on writing except for novels.)
2. " at 4:30" when I see it, I am thinking " Does it mean you can meet before 4:30 on Monday and Wednesay since you put a specific time?"
但是考的很难 in a better way is 但是考试很难.
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Letter to Teacher
周老师,您好。上个星期我看了课本，但是考的很难，所以我想问您几个问题。
您好。上个星期我看了课本，但是考得很难，所以我想问您几个问题。
请问，您下个星期二下午有空儿吗？我星期一星期三四点半有课。
-(My name)
My intention:
Mr. Zhou,
Last week, I read the textbook, but the quiz was hard. Thus, I want to ask you a few questions. Do you have time next Tuesday afternoon? I have class on Monday and Wednesday at 4:30.
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