Buy and Hold
Sometimes learn a new language can be very hard.
All things that requires motivation and discipline for a long time turn into big challenges.
This is especially hard now, because our generation aren't used to it. In times when everything is fast and instantaneous, learn another language seems to be a difficult long term investiment.
I always think on benefits and new relationships that It could be give to me when I''ll have fluency. Considering a new language, not just a capacity to communicate, but, in fact, a new cultural world related on it.
And that moves me foward all obstacles.
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Buy and Hold
Sometimes learning a new language can be very hard.All things that requires motivation and discipline for a long time can turn into big challenges.
This is especially hard now, because our generation aren't isn't used to it. In times when everything is fast and instantaneous, learning another language seems to be a difficult, long term investiment. (investment)
I always think on benefits and new relationships that It could be give to me when I''ll have fluency. I always think of the benefits and new relationships that will come when I have fluency. Considering a new language, not just a capacity to communicate, but, in fact, a new cultural world related on it. Considering a new language, it's not just the capacity to communicate but, in fact, the new cultural world related to it.
And that moves me foward beyond/ past all obstacles.
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generation is singular (one generation) so the verb must agree... generation isn't // generations aren't
My one suggestion would be somehow put the term 'buy and hold' into the passage. It's clear that you are comparing language learning to the investment strategy, so I think you could write something about that to connect back to your title.
GREAT WORK! ... and so true.
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Buy and Hold
Sometimes learning a new language can be very hard.All things that requires motivation and discipline for a long time turn into big challenges.
This is especially hard now, because our generation aren't isn'tused to it. In times when everything is fast and instantaneous, learning another language seems to be a difficult long term investiment.investment
I always think onof benefits and new relationships that It could be give to me when I''ll have fluency. Considering a new language, not just a capacity to communicate, but, in fact, a new cultural world related on it.
And that moves me foward against all obstacles.
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