Dear Environment Editor:
I am writing this letter with regard to teach other people in our country about don`t buy wild animal as a pet. Although some place sale wild animals, they don`t know about the damage that they cause in our enviorment; it is said that each wild animal that they sale could never be released into the wild.
Moreover, some people don`t know how they should be behavior when wild animals grow up in captivity and, due to they have animal instint they can bite and scratching also the natural habitat is artificial and they may be lived in badly conditions.
Another point is that they can be infected by human with diseases and humans can be infected the same way; in some cases could be dangerous.
In my opinion, the sale of wild animal shouldnt exist and tolerated,i am promoting that stores must be closed and some laws should be hard with them.
Eunice
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Dear Environment Editor:
I am writing this letter to educate other people in our country about the dangers of buying wild animals to keep as pets. Although some places sell wild animals, they do not know about the damage that they cause to our environment; it is said that each wild animal sold can never be released into the wild.Moreover, some people don't know how these wild animals will behave when they grow up in captivity. Their animal instincts could lead to them biting and scratching people and they may also be placed in conditions that are bad for their well-being since they are not in their natural habitats. Another point is that they can be infected by human diseases and humans can be infected by them; in some instances this could pose a danger.
In my opinion, the sale of wild animals should not exist or be tolerated. I believe that stores that sell wild animals should be shut down and tough laws should be enacted.
Sincerely,
Eunice
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Nice job, Eunice! Note that since this is a letter, you might not want to use contractions. Sometimes in formal writing, we don't use contractions. For example, I changed shouldn't in the last phrase to "should not". Keep up the good work!
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