hungry birds I go to work on foot because it is not far. My rout runs across the small park with a pint-sized pond. Usually there are a lot of people who walking with their children or running in this

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hungry birds I go to work on foot because it is not far. My rout runs across the small park with a pint-sized pond. Usually there are a lot of people who walking with their children or running in this park. Couples are sitting on the benches, retirees are engaging in Skandinavian walking, students of the institute of Arts drawing a rotunda which located in the middle of the pond. And all of them bring the bread for ducks living here. The ducks have got used to take a food from people and don't afraid come close to them. Today I saw a scene which was rediculous and frightening simulteneously. A girl about twelve years old decided to fed a ducks. She went to the pond and began throw a bread to ducks. There were about a fifty birds and just one girl. So this creatures ran to bank from water, surraunded her and organized a struggle for food. They clapped their wings and deafeningly quaked. Pigeons joined them. It looked like they were going to start eat the girl with her nice blue colored hat. So it would be better to avoid this place in the dark :)

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Hungry Birds (American's love to capitalize things) Any spelling corrections will be in American English; British English can be very different.

I go to work on foot because it is not far. My route runs across the a small park with a pint-sized pond (this is a great description!). Usually there are a lot of people who are walking with their children or running in this park. Couples are sitting on the benches, retirees are engaging in Scandinavian walking, students of the institute of Arts are building drawing a rotunda which is located in the middle of the pond. And all of them bring the bread for the ducks living here. The ducks have gotten used to taking a food from people and don't aren't afraid to come close to them. Today I saw a scene which was simultaneously ridiculous and frightening simultaneously. A girl about twelve years old decided to feed the a ducks. She went to the pond and began to throw a bread to the ducks. There were about a fifty birds and just one girl. So this these creatures ran to the bank from the water, surrounded her, and organized a struggle for food. (An English teacher might correct this to, ""struggled for food," but I like the picture is paints. It's very artistic) They clapped their wings and deafeningly quacked. Pigeons joined them. It looked like they were going to start to eat the girl with her nice blue colored hat. So it would be better to avoid this place in the dark :)

I really like your writing. I hope I get to see more of it. :-)

Note: You can say, "simultaneously ridiculous...." or "ridiculous and frightening at the same time." No good reason; it's just the way we talk."

Yes, it's pretty good place but quite small alas. Thank you for correction :)

Sounds like a nice, relaxing park to go to. I would probably bring my hammock and sleep nearby!

hungry birds

I go to work on foot because it is not far. My rout runs across a small park with a pint-sized pond. Usually there are a lot of people who walk with their children or run in this park. Couples sit on the benches, retirees are engaging in Skandinavian walking, and students of the institute of Arts draw a rotunda which located in the middle of the pond. All of them bring the bread for ducks living here. The ducks have gotten used to taking food from people and aren't afraid to come close to them. Today I saw a scene which was ridiculous and frightening simultaneously. A girl about twelve years old decided to feed the ducks. She went to the pond and began throw a bread to the ducks. There were about a fifty birds and just one girl. So this creatures ran to bank from water, surrounded her, and organized a struggle for food. They flapped their wings and deafeningly quacked. Pigeons joined them. It looked like they were going to start to eat the girl with her nice blue colored hat. So it would be better to avoid this place in the dark :)

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