[I went to Sasebo city from Nagasaki city, Japan. 102 ] Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would you go about writing it? Which part should I describe in detail? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand them. (Part Eight) I went to Sasebo city from Nagasaki city by train for about one and half hour. The train was nice and slow. I saw good seaside from the train window. There are pretty country sides and it has a laid buck atmosphere that I felt. Sasebo used to be fishing village. After Wold War Two, It become the U.S. Navy base and so we can see American people everywhere. I visited the shopping street which has a long street. There are a variety shops and restaurants. Then, I had a Sasebo burger which is well- known for tasty American styles. Many tourist visit to have the hum-burgers from all of the single places.