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Can you correct my essay ? Donald Trump decided to name Jerome Powell as the future chief of America central bank (Fed). He may take the place of Ms Yellen, who stayed 4 years in the head of the Fed. Nevertheless, he must continue the policy of Ms Jellen, and will not make a shift in the American policy. His background is not common for a chief of the Fed : he is not an economist but rather a lawyer, which could nevertheless be an advantage in some negotiations. Donald Trump wants to change the chief of the Fed, not because he does not like the Jellen’s policy, but in order to impose his mark.

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Donald Trump decided to name Jerome Powell as the future chief (Chair?) of America's central bank (Fed). He may take the place of Ms. Yellen, who stayed four years at the head of the Fed. Nevertheless, he must continue Ms. Jellen's legacy, and will not make a shift in American policy. 

His background is not typical for a chief (?) of the Fed: he is not an economist but rather a lawyer, which could nevertheless become an advantage in some negotiations.

Donald Trump wants to replace the chief (chair?) of the Fed, not because he does not like Jellen’s policy, but to impose his mark.


Very good! I made a few stylistic change (typical, "to" versus" in order to" - although you can say "in order to" but it is overused). Not sure also we say the "chief of the Fed" - might want to look it up.I think we say "Chair") 

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Can you correct my essay ?

Donald Trump has decided to name Jerome Powell as the future chief of America's central bank (Fed). He may will take the place of Ms. Yellen, who stayed 4 years as in the head of the Fed. Nevertheless, he must will likely continue the policy of Ms. JYellen, and will likely not make a shift in the American policy.
His background is not common for a chief of the Fed: Hhe is not an economist but rather a lawyer, which could nevertheless be an advantage in some negotiations.
Donald Trump wants to change the chief of the Fed,  not because he does not like the JYellen’s policy, but in order to impose his own mark.

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