Some emotional comments at night (Pls help to correct me)

I always wanted to achieve something in my life: [tip: use a colon to introduce a list of things] to lose weight, to master the two languages that I am working on…A lot of things, but right now it seems like I didn't keep my promise. I keep making plans for these so-called “big dreams” , but I [tip: use a conjunction like "but" or "and" to join two clauses] keep failing and regretting and restarting. It becomes a vicious circle. It is so scary that finally, everyone is repeating this kind of life which is that she never vision to live in. I mean, we see how others live and kind of be judgmental and thought we would make a difference, but in the end, we actually are becoming like the ones that who [tip: use "who" as a pronoun for people, not "that"] we looked down on before.
(By the way, if someone is interested in serious language exchanging for "correcting writing between chinese- English " pls contact me, Thanks )

Some emotional comments at night (Pls help to correct me)

I always want to achieve something in my life, to lose weight, to master the two languages that I am working on…A lot of things, but right now it seems like I didn't keep my promise. I keep making plans for these so-called “big dreams” , keep failing and regretting and restarting. it becomes a vicious  empty circle. It is so scary that finally, everyone is repeating this kind of life which is that she   he  never vision to live in. I mean, we see how others live and kind of be judgmental and thought we would make a difference, in  at the end, we are actually are becoming the one that we looked down on before.
(By the way, if someone is interested in serious language exchanging for "correcting writing between chinese- English " pls contact me, Thanks )

comment : do not judge your self ..just move ahead and keep walking ..