Please correct my essay (about hobby)
In my opinion, a hobby is something that you enjoy doing, something that brings relief and allows you to relax. My favorite hobby is travelling. Travelling is a fascinated way to discover and know new things. Moreover, I love playing the piano, especially when I'm alone! To make the piano fluently, it isn't easy. But I've faced a lot of difficulties during my practice for songs. I've learnt to play piano by myself. I used to take some piano lessons, but in the end, I stopped them because I hadn't much time to take the course. At the moment I don't have a real piano, but a smaller one, given that its keyboard is shorter.
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Please correct my essay (about hobby)
In my opinion, a hobby is something that you enjoy doing, something that brings relief and allows helps you to relax. My favorite hobby is travelling. Travelling is a fascinateding way to discover and get to know new things. Moreover, I love playing the piano, especially when I'm alone! To make Playing the piano fluently, it isn't easy. But I've faced a lot of difficulties during my practice for songs. I've learnt to play piano by myself on my own. I used to take some piano lessons, but in the end, I stopped them because I hadn't did not have much time to take the course. At the moment I don't have a real piano, but a smaller one, given that its with a shorter keyboard is shorter.1
In my opinion, a hobby is something that you enjoy doing, something that brings relief and allows you to relax. My favorite hobby is travelling. Travelling is a fascinating way to discover and learn new things. Moreover, I love playing the piano, especially when I'm alone! To play the piano fluently, it isn't easy. But I've faced a lot of difficulties whilst learning these songs. I've learnt to play piano by myself. I used to take some piano lessons, but in the end I stopped them because I hadn't much time to take the course. At the moment I don't have a real piano, but a smaller one, given that its keyboard is shorter.
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