Kate’s Toys
When I was seven years old I wrote my first story in the fact it was silly and stupid but I like it maybe because it reflect my dreams. It’s about a little girl is called Kate likes to sleep a lot because in her dreams she was traveling all around the world and get a toy from each country she visited to collect them in her room and make them her true friends. she doesn’t has friends in her school she was very shy , quiet , weak and boring so no one likes her .
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Kate’s Toys
When I was seven years old I wrote my first story in the fact it was silly and stupid but I like it maybe because it reflected/reflects my dreams. It’s about a little girl is called Kate who likes to sleep a lot because in her dreams she used to travel all around the world and get a toy from each country she visited to collect them in her room and make them her true friends. She didn't have friends at school she because she was very shy , quiet , weak and boring so no one liked her .Hi, you want to make sure you you are consistent with your verb tense. If you are in past use the past, if you are in present use the present. Good story!
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