The word surrounding us
Please correct my english. The picture was taken at a moment when I was in a complete silent and a deep thinking. I thought to my self what not to sure with other. Just thought to my self how I become very closed-minded sometimes and see one angle from an issue. If I had have taken a whole picture of the street, You would see a lot of pedestrians and kids are walking and eating their dinner ouside of restaurants. So I will always try to look outside of the box to the big picture. Always to sustain positive thinking. I know that my thoughts are not organized.But I'm trying to develop a habit of writing english everyday. Thank you all for your corrections in advance
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The world surrounding us
Please correct my English. This picture was taken at a moment when I was completely silent and in deep thought. I thought to myself that I am very closed-minded sometimes and only see one angle of an issue. For example, if I had taken a picture of the whole street, you would see a lot of pedestrians and kids, walking and eating their dinner outside of restaurants. From now on, I will always try to look at the big picture and to achieve positive thinking. I know that my thoughts are not organized but I'm trying to develop a habit of writing English everyday. Thank you all for your corrections in advance0
Hi Layla,
Your writing seems fundamentally not logical, but please do not get me wrong. I do not want to make hopeless.
Generally, you need to work on your English grammar, and find out some writing techniques to get rid of boring sentences, thus the reader would pay curiosity to carry on reading your writing.
First of all, you should choose a topic to write on. Then, you would start with a topic sentence, the body, and eventually the conclusion,
Hope this is helpful.
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