First notebook entry: Introducing my hometown

I am a girl who come from China.I am majoring in landscape in Zhanjiang normal university.In our school,there so many girls and they are beautiful.My homeltown near a beautiful sea and there are many fish and the other animals there.Of course ,what make me exciting is that in Zhnajiang there many park which is free for traveling.
Welcome you to visit my hometown one day.

... who comes... there are so many... hometown is near... (not 'a' sea) and other animals... what makes me excited... there are many parks which are... (traveling?)

Welcome to my hometown...