My love I am charmed. I think so it will away. I like my colleague to much. Unfortunately I talk to him only a little. He is alone, but he doesn’t attention for me. He is very handsome man. He is ta

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Iwona

My love I am charmed. I think so it will away. I like my colleague to much. Unfortunately I talk to him only a little. He is alone, but he doesn’t attention for me. He is very handsome man. He is taller than me. I like his eyes and his face. And so I feel bad. I’m shy and boring girl. I don’t have assertiveness. He know language English very well, but I don’t. I feel stupid sometimes and I prefer to avoid him. I fake that I don’t like him. I’m afraid he notice it. Nobody know about them and it is my secret. My friends doesn’t seeing it. That way I can calmly sleep and dreams about him.

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My love

I am charmed. And I think that it will pass. I like my colleague too much. Unfortunately I talk to him only a little. He is alone, but he doesn’t notice me. He is very handsome and is taller than me. I like his eyes and his face. And so I feel bad. I’m shy and boring. I am not assertive. He knows the English language very well, but I don’t. I feel stupid sometimes and I prefer to avoid him. I fake that I don’t like him. I’m afraid that he will notice it. Nobody knows about this and it is my secret. My friends do not suspect a thing. That way I can calmly sleep and dream about him.

Very well written!

My love

I am charmed(this sentence sounds a bit weird). I think so that it will go away. I like my colleague too much. Unfortunately, I talk to him only a little. He is alone(are you trying to say: "He is single"?), but he doesn’t pay attention for to me. He is a very handsome man. He is taller than me. I like his eyes and his face. And so I feel bad. I’m a shy and boring girl. I don’t have assertiveness(It sounds better if you say: I'm not assertive/i'm not confident). He know language speaks English very well, but .I don’t. I feel stupid sometimes and I prefer to avoid him. I fake that I don’t like him. I’m afraid he will notice it(or: i'm afraid he notices it). Nobody knows about them him and it is my secret. My friends doesn’t seeing don't see it. That way I can calmly sleep peacefully and dreams about him.

Hi Iwona,

My corrections are in yellow and there is one sentence at the beginning that I don't understand. Please explain!

Have a lovely evening,

Lou

My love

I am charmed. I think so it will away. (I don't understand this sentence, sorry) I like my colleague too much. Unfortunately, I talk to him only a little. He is alone, but he doesn’t pay attention to for me. He is a very handsome man. He is taller than me. I like his eyes and his face. And so I feel bad. I’m a shy and boring girl. I am not don’t have assertiveness. He can speak / speaks know language English very well, but I don’t. I feel stupid sometimes and I prefer to avoid him. I pretend fake that I don’t like him. I’m afraid he notices it. Nobody knows about them and it is my secret. My friends don't see doesn’t seeing it. That way I can calmly sleep and dreams about him.

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