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This week This Monday and Tuesday, I had 2 days off in a row. Monday, I went to a visa centre to submit some papers that relates working holiday. It took about 45 minutes. I hope it would be not rejected. After that, I met my friend and took lunch. I saw her for the first time in 3 years, however I didn't feel the distance. We were chatting whole the time for 6 hours. We couldn't stop talking. My cheeks hurt from laughing too much. Tuesday, I went eat Thai food with my 7 coworkers. Because of the number of members, we was able to order many various foods. All foods were very tasty, and not spicy too much, so it was easy to eat for us Japanese. I spent good time with my friends this week.

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This week

This Monday and Tuesday, I had 2 days off in a row.[not necessary, since you mentioned monday and tuesday at the beggining]


Or Just say, This week I got two consecutive day offs, Ie. on Monday and Tuesday.


On Monday, I went to a visa center to submit some papers relating to that relates working holiday. It took about 45 minutes. I hope it will not would be  rejected/ I hope it will be accepted.[more positive tone]
After that, I met my friend and had took lunch. I saw her for the first time in 3 years, however It didn't feel like a long time the distance. We constantly chat whole the time for 6 for hours well before this meeting. We couldn't stop talking. My cheeks/jaw hurts from laughing too much.

on Tuesday, I went to eat Thai food with my 7 other coworkers. Because of the number of members, we were was able to order varieties/[various types]/[many types] of food. All food items were very tasty, and were not too/that spicy too much, so it was easy for us to eat for us as Japanese.

I had/spent a good time with my friends this week.

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