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IMPORTANT need your help! I have in one week an interview for a scholarship which allows me to live for 10 month in the USA. I have to introduce me in englisch and i hope you can correct my little speech. It has to be casual Hello everyone my name is Katharina i'm 16 years old and i life with my parents and my older brother in .... its near to ..... I'm in the eleventh grade of a special kind of grammar school, it called FOS. I choose the social subject area, which means that i work at the moment in the kindergarten and next semester i will work in the hospital. My hobbies are horse back riding, listen to music and to bake. I would say that's it

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IMPORTANT need your help!

I have  an interview for a scholarship in one week which will allow me to live for 10 months in the USA. I have to introduce myself in English and I hope you can correct my little speech. It has to be casual


Hello everyone my name is Katharina I'm 16 years old and I live with my parents and my older brother in .... its near  ..... I'm in the eleventh grade of a special kind of grammar school, called FOS. I have chosen the social subject area, which means that I am working  in a kindergarten at the moment and next semester i will work in a hospital. My hobbies are horse riding, listening to music and baking. I would say that's it

Hello Katharina,

Generally your language is fine, it is normal in English to put the time expression at the end of the clause but some times you may find it at the beginning.

Good luck with your interview.


Bob

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IMPORTANT need your help!

I have in one week an interview for a scholarship which allows me to live for 10 month in the USA. I have to introduce me in englisch and i hope you can correct my little speech. It has to be casual

Hello everyone, my name is Katharina. I'm 16 years old and I live with my parents and my older brother in .... its near to ..... I'm in the eleventh grade at a special kind of grammar school, it called FOS. I chose to study social subjects, which means that i work, at the moment, in a kindergarten and next semester i will work in a hospital. My hobbies are horseback riding, listening to music and baking. I would say that's it.


Good luck!

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