An email: A concert you went to
Dear Friend,
Last week I went to a concert. I decided to go to the concert because I love music. The performance was amazing, the singer was wearing fancy clothes. The beats were so amazing without electronic effects, just the naked voice.I had heard music on the radio, or on my phone, but seeing it live is a magic experience. The voice sounded more clearer, and I mean it's a magical connection and the music really connected with my soul.
I look forward to watch one again!
Sincerely,
Nina
(*) edited after friend's advice.
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An email: A concert you went to
Dear Friend,Last week I went to a concert*. I decided to go to the concert because I love music. The performance was amazing, the singer was wearing fancy clothes. The (again, I wouldn't use 'music' here) beats were so amazing without electronic effects, just the naked voice.I had heard music on the radio, or on my phone, but seeing it live is a magic experience. The voice sounded clearer, and I mean it is a bit magic, because it is a connection ('I don´t know but is a plug in with my own soul' I don't understand this bit).
I look forward to seeing one again!
Sincerely,
Nina
*There is no need for 'music' here. In English we have other words if it is a different performance. A very common word for a 'music concert' is 'gig'. Its probably the most common.
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