My first picture (my writing challenge - day 9)
Hi, I want to write evening yesterday. It would be great, if you could correct it. Thanks!
Yesterday I was painting my first picture. I’ve never painted before with Acryl. And I’ve never painted a picture on this way. Only some flowers on small paper.
I read about an art workshop as an event. Their promise is: You can paint a picture in 2 hours, it doesn’t matter if you are a beginner or an expert. You only need to choose an event or the motive of the day. Wow, sounds great.
I was there with 20 other people. Our art guide prepared our art desktop with a table easel, 3 brushes, 1 pencil, a plate with different acrylic colors, water and a canvas.
I was a little bit nervous, but our guide explained step by step. First, we need a horizon, then the moon, the blue color with white and later with dark blue for the sky, green for the grass, black for trees and so on. She had explained it very easy. I was surprised. Only 2 hours and my picture showed a full moon, who is shining through a wood with red leaves in the current season, in fall.
It was amazing and fun to paint in group with inspiring music. I look forward to my next painting event. :)
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My first picture (my writing challenge - day 9)
Hi, I want to write this evening about yesterday. It would be great, if you could correct it. Thanks!Yesterday I
Da du am Ende sagst, dass du früher Blumen gemalt hast, kannst du nicht sagen, dass du gestern dein erstes Bild gemalt hast.
"in a new class" musst du auch sagen.
Der letzte Satz hatte kein Verb, daher war er grammatikalisch falsch. Man kann das nur machen, wenn man redet.
I read about an art workshop as a social event gathering. Their They promised is You can we could paint a picture in 2 hours, it doesn’t matter if you are whether we were a beginner or an expert. You only needed to choose an event or the motive a topic of the day. Wow, sounded great!
"event" klingt eher seltsam. Ein "event" ist normalerweise ein Wettbewerb.
Sei bitte vorsichtig. Wenn du mit dem Präteritum beginnst, kannst du nicht hin und her zwischen dem Präteritum und dem Präsens schreiben.
I was there with 20 other people. Our art guide teacher prepared our art desktop with a table easel, 3 brushes, 1 pencil, a plate with different acrylic colors, water and a canvas.
I was a little bit nervous, but our guide the teacher explained everything step by step. First, we needed a horizon, then the moon, the - a blue color mixed with white and later on with dark blue for the sky, green for the grass, black for trees and so on. She had explained it very easy simply. I was surprised. After only 2 hours and my picture showed a full moon, who is which was shining through a wooded area. with The trees had red leaves in the depicting the current fall season in fall.
who = people which = things
It was amazing and fun to paint in a group with inspiring music in the background. I look forward to my next painting event lesson. :)
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My first picture (my writing challenge - day 9)
Hi, I wanted to write yesterday evening. It would be great if you could correct it. Thanks!Yesterday I was painting my first picture. I’ve never painted before in acrylics. And I’ve never painted a picture in this way; only some flowers on small paper.
I read about an art workshop as an event. They promise that you can paint a picture in 2 hours and it doesn’t matter if you are a beginner or an expert. You only need to choose an event or the motif of the day. Wow, it sounds great.
I was there with 20 other people. Our art guide prepared our art desktop with a table easel, 3 brushes, 1 pencil, a plate with different acrylic colors, water and a canvas.
I was a little bit nervous, but our guide explained step by step. First, we need a horizon, then the moon, blues of light and later with dark for the sky, green for the grass, black for trees and so on. She explained it very easily. I was surprised. In only 2 hours my picture showed a full moon, who shone through a wood with red leaves in the current season, in fall.
It was amazing and fun to paint in this group with inspiring music. I look forward to my next painting event. :)
Very well written and painted!
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