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My interest in psychology During the last year, I found myself very interested in psychology issues. I think that my new hobby is due to the fact, that I' m getting older and by the age 30th you have already got some life experience, but also you have a lot of questions. I have a lot of Russian and American books about family, love, relationships, People's attitude, etc. I think that all these huge amount of psyhological books is just about only one -an individual. And also I understood that every person should leave their own life and work on his/her mood and spirit. Mikhail Labkovsky, one of my favorite psyhologist, in my opinion found some wise and simple rules to feel happy everyday:1. You should do that you want to do. 2. You shouldn't do that you don't want to do. 3. During conversation with your partner you should immediately tell him/her what you don't like 4. Don't start to say smth before the question 5. Answer only the quation that was asked 6. During the quarrel, tell only about yourself. According Michael Labkovsy essays, these 6 rules could help people to feel happy and confident, and leave the life that they really want. Would you please write a correction? Thank you in advance!!!

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My interest in psychology

During the last year, I found myself very interested in psychology issues. I think that my new hobby is due to the fact, that I' m getting older and by the age of 30 you have already got some life experience, but also you have a lot of questions. I have a lot of Russian and American books about family, love, relationships, people's attitudes, etc. I think that all these huge amount of psychological books are just about only one thing -an individual. And also I understood that every person should live their own life and work on his/her mood and spirit. Mikhail Labkovsky, one of my favorite psyhologists, in my opinion found some wise and simple rules to feel happy everyday:1. You should do what you want to do. 2. You shouldn't do what you don't want to do. 3. During conversation with your partner you should immediately tell him/her what you don't like 4. Don't start to say something before the question 5. Answer only the quation that was asked 6. During the quarrel, speak only about yourself. According Michael Labkovsy's essays, these 6 rules could help people to feel happy and confident, and live the life that they really want.
Would you please write a correction? Thank you in advance!!!

* probably simpler and more elegant to say 'I think that all these psychology books are about the same thing"

* do what you want to do / do that which you want to do - either would work.


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