Could you correct my diary?
Recently i quit the job due to bad things.
It accidentally made me mylife messed.
I was finally knocked out by anxious.
It seems that I have been feeling a lot of stress.
And I feel somethins huge invisuable, like somethings huge are attacking me.
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Could you correct my diary?
Recently I quit the my job because of bad things (happening around me).It accidentally messed up my life.
I was finally knocked out by anxiety.
It seems that I have been feeling a lot of stress lately.
And I feel like something huge and invisible is attacking me.
Don't give up Risa!
Take a break, collect your thoughts and figure out what is most important for you. Keep your eyes open for another job, too! Maybe you just need a change of scenery or meet new people or find a new hobby.
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Could you correct my diary?
Recently I quit/resigned (from) the my job due to problems/difficulties/[bad things].It had (accidentally) made me my life a mess/messed up my life.
I was finally defeated/[knocked out] by anxietyous.
(It seems that) I have been [feeling]/under a lot of stress,
and I feel as though something huge and/but invisible, [like somethings huge] are is attacking me.
You definitely need a break ! I hope you will feel better.
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かわいそう！ Anxiety is very difficult :(
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