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Advertising Nowadays young people are under big pressure to have expensive products and wear clothes by designer brands. I think almost everybody feels that pressure which comes from an intrusive advertising, which flashes before our eyes everywhere if we're listening to the radio, watching TV, reading magazines, surfing the Internet. Advertising follows us. There are a lot of different methods how to find customers and persuade them. Advertising makes us believe that we need to buy their staff for being happy, successful, healthy and beautiful. Famous brands can afford to spend a lot of money on an ad and create a mainstream. And if you want to be in a mainstream your should have some things. Young people are affected easier than adults that's why most of them become victims of the ad and often buy different expensive things which actually couldn't afford themself.

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Advertising

Nowadays young people are under huge pressure to have expensive products and wear clothes by designer brands. I think almost everybody feels that pressure, which comes from an intrusive advertising and which flashes before our eyes everywhere.  If we're listening to the radio, watching TV, reading magazines, surfing the Internet - advertising follows us. There are many different methods how to find customers and persuade them. Advertising makes us believe that we need to buy their stuff to be happy, successful, healthy and beautiful. Famous brands can afford to spend a lot of money on an ad and make it mainstream. And if you want to be in the mainstream you should have certain things. Young people are affected more easily than than adults, that's why most of them become victims of the ad and often buy different expensive things which they can't actually couldn't afford themself.
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Advertising

Nowadays young people are under big pressure to have expensive products and wear clothes by designer brands. I think almost everybody feels that pressure which comes from an intrusive advertising, which flashes before our eyes everywhere if we're listening to the radio, watching TV, reading magazines or surfing the Internet. Advertising follows us. There are a lot of different methods how to find customers and persuade them. Advertising makes us believe that we need to buy their staff stuff for being happy, successful, healthy and beautiful. Famous brands can afford to spend a lot of money on an ad and create a mainstream. And if you want to be in a mainstream your should have some/certain things. Young people are affected easier than adults. That's why most of them become victims (victim sounds too harsh here, maybe you could use another word like "target" for example) of the ad and often buy different expensive things which they actually couldn't afford themself.

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