About Peter...
Hello dear reviewer, this e-mail is an answer about what I think and know about Peter:
He is 40 years old, lives with his wife, has two younger sisters and works like engineer. Currently, he is doing a master in Germany. Peter works with renewable energy, I think this area is so interesting. About his personality, I can say He is a calm person, hard-working, creative, polite and smart. I don’t understand how, but He knows a little about everything. In his free time, He likes playing guitar, taking photos, studying about policy, working with wood and a lot another other things. Indeed, he has a lot of skills.
However, I think he is a little untidy and forgotten. Another disadvantage, if you are going to share the house with him, is that He likes listening music with high volume. So, I hope you enjoy heavy metal;
If you have another doubt, please write me.
See you later!
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He is 40 years old, lives with his wife, has two younger sisters and works as an engineer. Currently, he is doing a masters degree in Germany. Peter works with renewable energy, which I think is so interesting. He is a calm, hard-working, creative, polite and smart person. I don’t understand how, but he seems to know a little bit about everything. In his free time, he likes playing guitar, taking photos, studying policies, working with wood, and a lot of other things. Indeed, he has a lot of skills.
If you have any other doubts, please write to me.
See you later!
'Fascinating' could be used here to replace 'so interesting'.
You don't need to say 'about his personality' before describing his personality.
'Woodworking' could replace 'working with wood'.
'and a lot' could be replaced here with 'a variety'.
You could say 'Indeed, he is a man of many talents', which is a saying in English, however, 'he has a lot of skills' is also grammatically correct.
You could also say 'He likes listening to loud music' which sounds more natural, though both are grammatically correct.
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