今年的六一
很久都没动笔写过东西了，今天六一，十岁的妹妹敏敏玩得很开心。我都忘了最后一个六一是怎么过的，但是看着从校车下来的小朋友们，都拎着儿童大礼包，心里羡慕的很。
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Try to write in the language that you are learning, and get helpful corrections from native speakers.您应该尝试着用您正在学习的语言练习写作，将获得来自母语会员的修改和点评。同时，您还可以通过修改和点评其他会员的小作文，帮助他们学习您的母语。
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