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A trip to the zoo (2) June' parents parked the family car at the zoo car park. June got out the car, and run toward/to her friend who disguised with animals masks. All these friends were there to celebrate her birthday! The group began to visit the zoo starting with lions and panthers. They are like big cats with big tooths. Lions have a beautiful mane that used to charm lioness. More than the name is bushy mare lioness is impressed.

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June's parents parked their car in the zoo's parking lot.
June got out the car, and ran towards her friend who was wearing an animal mask. (disguised doesn't sound natural)
All of her friends were there to celebrate her birthday! The group began to visit the zoo first seeing the lions and panthers.
They are big cats with big teeth (teeth is the plural of tooth). Lions have a beautiful mane that used to charm lioness. (I didn't understand the last sentence)
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June's parents parked the family car at the zoo car park. June got out the car, and ran to her friend who was disguised with animals masks. All these friends were there to celebrate her birthday! The group began to visit the zoo starting with lions and panthers. They are like big cats with big teeth. Lions have a beautiful mane that used to charm lioness. More than the name is bushy mare lioness is impressed.

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