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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Correct, please!
Dear Tom,I haven't seen you for ages and now I won't see you again. I’m writing to ask you a favor. I'll be on a short business trip from Monday to Tuesday. I set off Monday at 4 pm and come back on Tuesday at 7:00 pm. It would be great if you could look after my dog these two days.
(Much easier to read if you say Monday or whatever day and be back on Tuesday or whatever day and also time is easier using am and pm. We don't put dots between cause we are lazy and we know what it means. If you choose to use the 24 hour clock then drop the am and pm and write 19:00hrs but it confuses the reader(me) when you mix and match.)
So if you agree you'll have to take my Jenny for a walk twice a day. For example, In the morning at about 07:00-08:00am and in the evening at about 07:00-8:00pm. Also it's very important to wash its paws right after each walk, please! Otherwise it can track dirt all over the house! Finally, I would ask you to feed it at least twice a day.
So that's it. You don't have to do anything else as I don't have any plants, for example. I also will take care of other household duties. I just want to make sure my Jenny will survive these days.
Write me back as soon as possible if you agree or don't.
Love,
Anastasia
Dear Tom,
I haven't seen you for ages, and now I won't see you again (?). I'm writing to ask you for a favour. I'm going on a short business trip from tomorrow until Tuesday [day of the week]. I'll set off at 4pm, and come back at 19:00 on Tuesday. It would be great if you could look after my dog when I'm away.
If you are agreeable, you'll need to take Jenny for a walk twice a day, for example, in the morning about 07:00-08:00, and in the evening about 19:00-20:00. It's also very important to wash her paws after each walk, otherwise she will get dirt all over the house! Also, you need to feed her at least twice a day. That's it. You don't have to do anything else as I don't have any plants, for example. I will take care of the other household duties. I just want to make sure Jenny will be looked after when I'm away.
Get back to me as soon as possible please and let me know if you can do this for me.
Love,
Anastasia
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