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Taylor Swift new song! I just listened to Taylor Swift 's new song Gorgeous. Unlike first two dark style songs in this new music album, gorgeous is more comfortable and nifty, such as the child's voice at the beginning. I feel sweet listening to her voice. When I listen to what you made me do and ready for it, I thought the whole music album would be in dark styles. I am pleasantly surprised by Gorgeous, feels like the old Taylor from her 1989. Taylor Swift you are gorgeous.

Could you please correct my novel if there's anything wrong and uncomfortable to read. I'm looking for a english native speaker partner to practice my speaking skills and I am a Chinese native speaker, if anyone is learning Chinese, I would also be happy to help!

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Taylor Swift's New Song! Titles need proper capitalization.

I just listened to Taylor Swift's new song, Gorgeous. Song titles should be in italics. Unlike her first two songs in this new music album which were dark, Gorgeous is more comfortable feeling and nifty, such as the child's voice at the beginning. I feel good listening to her voice (in this song). When I listened to What You Made Me Do and Ready for It, I thought the whole music album would be dark or "would have a dark theme" or "would have a dark feel to it". I am pleasantly surprised by Gorgeous; it feels like the old Taylor from 1989. Taylor Swift, you are gorgeous.

Could you please correct my novel if there's anything wrong and uncomfortable to read. I'm looking for a native English-speaking partner to practice my speaking skills. I am a Chinese native speaker; if anyone is learning Chinese, I would also be happy to help you!

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