Had Lunch with My Daughter
Today I was able to eat out for lunch with my 15-years-old daughter.
Being face to face with her, I talked about my experiences in work and travel abroad.
I usually do not have a long talk about something like this topic at home, so it was a very meaningful time.
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Lunch with My Daughter
Today I went out for lunch with my 15-year-old daughter.Sitting face to face with her, we talked about work and my experiences traveling abroad.
We don't usually have such long talks about these things at home, so it was a very meaningful time for me.
Hello Satoさん, your writing was clear and easy to understand...I just made a few changes to make it sound more natural. Remember, you can say "my daughter is 15 YEARS old" or "my 15-YEAR-old daughter". I'm glad you had a nice time with your daughter. Take care. Phil
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Had Lunch with My Daughter
Today I was able to eat lunch out for lunch with my 15-years-old daughter.Being face to face with her, I we talked about my experiences in work and travel abroad.
I usually do not have a long talks about something like this topic at home, so it was a very meaningful time.
Really good, I just changed it to how I would say it. I don't think there is anything wrong with your version.
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