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The beautiufl time in Lourldes. A few years ago, I decided to travel alone. Because I left my job and I experienced some sad things. I wanted to change my life and myself. It was a cold day in December. I was in Lourdes a small town in the south of france. There were beautifl mountains, there was a beautiful river. And the big church was there. Everything was different with my daily life. It was a very cold and little rainy night. I went to Grott. About 30 people were there. Three Priests appeared. Rosary started. It was prayed in 3 languages. French, Italian and English. I had a candle. they also had candles. The candle lights were shared by man from man. During sharing light the pray continued. There were silence and warm something. It was a great and beautiful time.

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The Beautiful time in Lourdes

A few years ago, I decided to travel alone because I left my job and I experienced some sad things.
I wanted to change my life and myself.

It was a cold day in December.
I was in Lourdes, a small town in the south of France.
There were beautiful mountains and a beautiful river.
And the a big church was there.
Everything was different with than my daily life.

It was a very cold and little rainy night. On a night that was very cold and a little rainy, I went to Grott.
About 30 people were there.
Three priests appeared. Rosary started.
It was prayed  The prayer was in 3 languages: French, Italian and English.
I had a candle; they also had candles.
The candles lights were shared passed by from man from to man.
During sharing light While sharing the candles the prayer continued. (I assume this is what you mean by "sharing light.")
There were silence and warm something. (What's "something?")(Suggestion: There was something warm and silent about it.)
It was a great and beautiful time.

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