[ I traveled in Nagasaki, Japan. 96 ] Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would you go about writing it? Which part should I describe with details? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand them. (Part Two) After eating a breakfast, I dropped at an information desk of Nagasaki Station to get a one day pass of the cable cars which was 500 yen. (about six Singapore dollars.) There are cable cars in Nagasaki. It is historical and classic. I like that! It's a convenient transportation. It was a my second riding of cable cars, the first riding was in Hiroshima. Afterward, I went to Urakami Cathedral which is a famous and historical church. Most of the buildings were damaged by an atomic bomb in the past. Nowadays,They've renovated. I saw several status which weren't fixed. It looked so sad.