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Learning Recently I moved to live in Saint Petersburg. There is a wonderful city, but weather is terrible. I entered the university here. I get a master's degree in environmental management. It's very interesting. But it's difficult and incomprehensible sometimes because my first education (bachelor) isn't related with ecology. Earlier I learned art, cinema and ethics in Academy of Arts in Minsk. But I like nature! I want to protect the environment. I think that in the modern world there are many problems associated with the pollution of nature and someone needs to deal with these issues.

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Recently I moved to live in Saint Petersburg. It is a wonderful city, but the weather is terrible. I entered the university here to get a Master's degree in Environmental Management. It's very interesting. But it's difficult and incomprehensible sometimes because my first degree (bachelor) isn't related to ecology. Earlier I learned art, cinema and ethics in the Academy of Arts in Minsk.
But I like nature! I want to protect the environment. I think that in the modern world there are many problems associated with the pollution of nature and someone needs to deal with these issues.

Hello Nasta,

I think you have chosen a good course and hope you will be able to use your knowledge to help the planet when you have completed your Masters.

Just a few small corrections, take care with articles and collocations.

Best wishes

Bob

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Good idea!) Thanks!
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Hello Nasta, I think you could improve your writing by joining the sentences together using connectors. This would make your writing flow better and make it easier to read. A few examples: "Recently I moved to St Petersburg, which is a wonderful city even though the weather is terrible". "I studied for a Masters in Environmental Management there, which was interesting but also challenging since my Bachelor degree isn't related to ecology". "I live nature and I want to protect the environment because our world is suffering from problems associated with pollution and someone needs to deal with these issues".

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