City event
If we was event's organizer we would organize big street party with different zones for all ages in the city park.
One zone will be for children, where they will be able play on attractions and climb on climbing wall. Other zone will be for teen, where they can ride to rollers and dance. Also we place a lot of attractions for adult, where they can to have fun.
As well here we will place food park, where people will be able to taste different dishes from around the world.
My main attraction on event would be evening concert where people can listen music for local musicians. Big stage in central park, good music and comfortable atmosphere.
And also we won't forget have enough public toilets, will hire many volunteers, who will help people and children on attractions, and will remove the garbage after party.
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If we were to organise an event we would have a big street party with different zones catering to specific age gropus in the city park.
One zone will be for children, where they will be able play on attractions and climb on climbing walls. The other zone will be for teens, where they can ride on rollers and dance. Also, we would place many attractions for adults, where they can have fun too.
Here we will have a food exhibition/tasting, where people will be able to sample different dishes from around the world.
Our (to be consistent with "we" used in first sentence) main attraction at the event would be an evening concert where people can listen to music performed by local musicians. Big stage in central park, good music and comfortable atmosphere.
And also, we won't forget to have enough public toilets, and will hire many volunteers, who will attend to people and children at the attractions, and remove the garbage after the party.
Did you have a bad day after attending a badly planned event today hahaha... All the best though if you do plan such an event... please invite me too!
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