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Visiting another city. I want to talk about my experience of staying in another city of my country. This summer me, my mother, my uncle and his family were in the city called Sol'-Iletsk which is situated in the south part of my city, Kazan. How can I describe it? Have you ever seen the city with poor houses, beautiful nature (but without grass bacause of the climate), a lot of tourists and noisy youth at the same time? So I can describe this city. Also, I think it´s not actually the city, it´s like a big village. The people from there were very polite and friendly. If you have any question, they´ll help you. It was that I liked more. Sol'-Iletsk is famous by its lakes. After them I didn´t have allergy! Before I have problems with my skin because of the allergy ( it was prohibited to me to eat sweets, oranges, any kind of white sugar. Also, I couldn´t stay under the Sun without a sweater. But now all is ok!) This city is the greatest place to improve your health. But if you´re looking for beautiful places, sights, you´ll notice there are no sights. All depends on your desires.

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Visiting another city.

I want to talk about my stay in another city in my country.
This summer my mother, my uncle, his family and myself* went to Sol'-Iletsk, a city in the south part of my region, Kazan. How can I describe it?
Have you ever seen a city with poor houses, beautiful nature (but without grass bacause of the climate), a lot of tourists and noisy youth at the same time? So I can describe this city. Also, I think it´s not actually a city, but more like a big village.
The locals were very polite and friendly. If you had a question, they would help you. It was that that I liked more.
Sol'-Iletsk is famous for its lakes. After them I didn´t have an allergy! Before I had** problems with my skin because of an allergy ( it was prohibited for me to eat sweets, oranges, any kind of white sugar. Also, I couldn´t stay under the Sun without a sweater. But now all is ok!)
This city is the greatest place to improve your health. But if you´re looking for beautiful places, sights, you will notice there are no sights. It all depends on your desires.

*your variation is informal English and you can often hear it said on the streets. I corrected it with the formal (exam) version. Take your pick.

**here, it is vital to distinguish "had" from "have" and to pick the right one.

*very well written and fascinating environmental health story. Thanks!

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