The happiness
In this post I would like to speak about the happiness.
I believe that all the people should have his preferences about the most important things in life.
In my case, I agree with lot of people that money is important for having a life without worries. But I'm sure that to have a lot of money doesn't give you the happiness.
To be happy you need to feel the love and the affection of your family, your friends, your partner even your pet. To feel healthy and with energy to begin the day with a big smile. Also, can do your favorites activities and share it with the people that you want.
I always thought that we have too many reasons to be happy but it's a pitty that some people only think about money.
What would I do If I won the lottery?
I'm convinced that I would help economically the needy people and the abandoned animals. It's my dream and the only one reason to earn lot of money.
Will it happen? Until then, I will have to keep dreaming.
Thank you for read my text. If you want to help me with the mistakes I will be thankful :)
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The Happiness
In this post I would like to speak about the happiness.I believe that all the people should have their preferences about the most important things in life.
In my case, I agree with lots of people that money is important for having a life without worries. But I'm sure that to have a lot of money doesn't give you the happiness.
To be happy you need to feel the love and the affection of your family, your friends, your partner even your pet. To feel healthy and with energy to begin the day with a big smile. Also, to be able to do your favorites activities and share it with the people that you want.
I always thought that we have too many reasons to be happy but it's a pitty that some people only think about money.
What would I do If I won the lottery?
I'm convinced that I would help economically the needy people and the abandoned animals. It's my dream and the only one reason to earn lot of money.
Will it happen? Until then, I will have to keep dreaming.
Thank you for reading my text. If you want to help me with my mistakes I will be thankful :)
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Happiness
In this post I would like to speak about happiness*.I believe that all people* should have their own preferences about the most important things in life.
In my case, I agree with a lot of people that money is important for having a life without worries. But I'm sure that to have a lot of money doesn't give you happiness.
To be happy you need to feel the love and affection of your family, your friends, your partner or even your pet. You need to feel healthy and with energy to begin the day with a big smile. Also, you can do your favorite activities and share them with the people who you want.
I always thought that we have so many reasons to be happy and it's a pity that some people only think about money.
What would I do If I won the lottery?
I'm convinced that I would help financially the poor, and abandoned animals. It's my dream and my only reason to earn lot of money.
Will it happen? Until then, I will have to keep dreaming.
Thank you for reading my text. If you want to help me with the mistakes I will be thankful :)
English, unlike Spanish, French, German .., never writes .. the happiness, the people, the love, the faith, ... and says happiness, people, love, faith,... instead. No abstract noun has a 'the' before it.
Very well written!
Very well written!
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Thank you!!
Diego Remon I agree also with you. Travel offers you the posibility of growing in different areas of your life:) It´s wonderful!
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Totally agree! In my case two things make me feel very good; to help another people and to travel. I love travel. It´s one of the best feelings when you´re in a strange country, in a strange city and you mix with the natives and you feel the particular atmosphere. So, the answer to the question about lotery is that: help people and travel a lot!
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I like it
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