enviornment
It is proven that our daily routine affects the enviornment. The main effect, it is global warming due the green house effect. Global warming is an increase in Earth's temperature and, because of this, maryed animals suffer the consequencies. The increase of temperatures produce a cup melts and consequently an increase in the level of the seas. It also produces an extreme weather events like droughts or floods which causes economic looses in ranching and agriculture.
Should governments take serous measures or the situation could get worse. We need invesments in clean energy rather than taxes. Learning in the schools the importance of preserve nature and to be enviormental friendly and respect with animals, in order that in a pair of generations the world could count with respectfull adults. Summerizing, the increase of the global warming is the responsability of everyone, and we must put our two cents to reduce our impact in the enviornment.
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The Environment
It has been proven that our daily routine affects the environment. The main effect is global warming due to the green house effect. Global warming is an increase in the Earth's temperature and, because of this, many animals suffer the consequences. The increase in temperatures makes the ice caps melt and consequently there is an increase in the level of the seas. It also produces extreme weather events like droughts or floods which causes economic losses in ranching and agriculture.The governments should take serous measures or the situation could get worse. We need investments in clean energy rather than taxes. The importance of preserving nature, being environmentally friendly and respecting animals, should be taught in schools in order that in a couple of generations the world would be full of respectful adults.
in summary, the increase in the global warming is the responsibility of everyone, and we must use our two cents to reduce our impact on the environment.
Hello Inma,
Your ideas make a lot of sense but will governments ever listen?
There are several corrections, you seem to have problems especially with spelling longer words. Unfortunately English is not written as it is often said, you need to learn the correct spellings. A couple of sentences needed reordering to make them more natural but in spite of the mistakes I was able to understand all of your message.
Best wishes
Bob
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environment
is proven that our daily routine affects the environment. The main effect, it is global warming due to the green house effect. Global warming is an increase in Earth's temperature and, because of this, maryed many animals suffer the consequences. The increase of in temperatures produces a cap melts and consequently an increase in sea levels the level of the seas. It also produces an extreme weather events like droughts or floods which causes economic looses in ranching (ranching-do you mean animal farming?) and agriculture.
Governments should take serious measures or the situation could get worse. We need investments in clean energy rather than taxes. Learning in the schools the importance of preserving nature, and to being environmentally friendly and having respect with for animals, so in order that in a pair of few generations time the world could will be able to count with on having respectful adults. Summarizing, the increase of the in global warming is the responsibility of everyone, and we must put in our two cents to reduce our impact on the environment.
Hi Inma,
I hope this is helpful
Kara :)
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I´m agree with you about goverments but I´m sure the solution starts with us. If every people in the planet was able to spend only one minute a day thinking about the enviroment, Earth would have a better future, for sure. So, let´s start now, in this very moment, and think twice before throw a glass in a organic container and think twice before let the water running while we look at ourselves in the mirror ;) Nice entry, Inma, with a message that invites to think about!
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