The postcard
I like to travel and I send postcards to my friends and myself in every trip.
I spend a long time choosing postcards in the gift shop and then I buy stamps at the post office.
It's very difficult to write something interesting on a postcard.
I like to put the postcard in the letterbox. And I like to get my postcard when I come home after the trip.
I often look at old postcards and remember the good days when I was happy.
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The postcard
I like to travel and I send postcards to my friends and (to) myself every time I travel.I spend a long time choosing postcards in the gift shop and then I buy stamps at the post office.
It's very difficult to write something interesting (text) on a postcard.
I like to put (finished complete) the postcard in the letterbox and I like to receive my postcard when I come home after the trip.
I often look at old postcards and remember the good days when I was happy.
Hi Dasha, I like your text - it's a bit old fashioned and cute to send postcards today! I made a few corrections to the text to help you. Brackets () mean the word is unnecessary. Looking at your writing I think there are 2 things you need to work on:
1. Using connectors (and, but, when, etc.) to join sentences and make your writing flow more naturally.
2. Use of the definite article 'the'. This could be related to your mother tongue and I don't know you but I'm guessing you're from Eastern Europe or Russia. Let me know if I'm right!
Stephen
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The postcard
I like to travel. I send postcards to my friends and to myself on every trip.I spend a long time choosing postcards in the gift shop and then I buy post stamps at the post office.
It's very difficult to write something interesting on a postcard.
I like to put the finished postcard in the letterbox. And I like to get my postcard when I come home after my trip.
I often look at old postcards and remember the good days when I was happy.
(Your grammar was pretty good, I made some corrections to make it sound more natural in English.)
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