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ACG gilr
I'm an eccentric girl who is a 17-year-old university student in China. Drawing is my favorite thing in all my life ~~~ I always skip from some boring classes to go to a coffee shop, just for to watching passer-bys through the window and paint their funny expressions and wonderful dresses .~~
I have many foibles such as collecting my own eyelashes , nailing scissors (??? I've never heard of "nailing scissors" before, and I don't know what you mean!) , playing tricks on people...
I think that English is a beautiful language which that attracts me so much. Because of the less chances to study it (This is wrong: try "I have few chances to study it" - also, you can't use "Because... so", I don't think), so I wanna make a few friends who are good at English to improve my ability of at it. (Or even better: "to improve my ability." Nothing else is needed at the end.)
One thing I noticed is that you put a space before you put a period (.) like this:
I want to meet English friends .This is another sentence.
I don't know if that's just a typo or not, but you shouldn't have spaces before your periods. It should be like this:
I want to meet English friends. This is another sentence.
Your English is really good, by the way! I am happy to help you out if you need any help practicing, or if you want any corrections!
Wanna is improper English.
Should use "want to."
Wanna is slang and could convey an image that the user is uneducated, depending how it is used.
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