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ACG gilr I'm an eccentric girl who is a 17-year-old university student in China . Drawing is my favorite in all my life ~~~I always skip from some boring classes to a coffee shop ,just for watching passer-by through the window and paint their funny expressions wonderful dresses .~~ I have many foibles such as collecting my own eyelashs , nailing scissors , play tricks on people ... I think that English is a beautiful language which attracts me so much .Because of the less chances to study it ,so I wanna make a few friends who are good at English to improve my ability of it .

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ACG gilr

I'm an eccentric girl who is a 17-year-old university student in China. Drawing is my favorite thing in all my life ~~~ I always skip from some boring classes to go to a coffee shop, just for to watching passer-bys through the window and paint their funny expressions and wonderful dresses .~~
I have many foibles such as collecting my own eyelashes , nailing scissors (??? I've never heard of "nailing scissors" before, and I don't know what you mean!) , playing tricks on people...
I think that English is a beautiful language which that attracts me so much. Because of the less chances to study it (This is wrong: try "I have few chances to study it" - also, you can't use "Because... so", I don't think), so I wanna make a few friends who are good at English to improve my ability of at it. (Or even better: "to improve my ability." Nothing else is needed at the end.)

 

One thing I noticed is that you put a space before you put a period (.) like this:

I want to meet English friends .This is another sentence.

I don't know if that's just a typo or not, but you shouldn't have spaces before your periods. It should be like this:

I want to meet English friends. This is another sentence.

 

Your English is really good, by the way! I am happy to help you out if you need any help practicing, or if you want any corrections!

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Wanna is improper English.

Should use "want to."

 

Wanna is slang and could convey an image that the user is uneducated, depending how it is used.

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