How was my day?
Today I went to the gym at two o'clock. It was empty. I enjoyed it because I could use all the machines and nobody disturb me.
When I finished I bought a bottle water and comming back home.
Later I went to the market to buy something of vegetables. Here I found a old friend of school. She was going with her family. Since 5 years I don't see her. This day was a full surprising day.
I hope found more old friends to know about something them. :)
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Today I went to the gym at two o'clock. It was empty. I enjoyed it because I could use all the machines and nobody disturbed me. When I finished I bought a bottle of water and comming went back home. Later I went to the market to buy something of vegetables. There I found saw an old friend of from school. She was going with her family. Since 5 years I don't see her I hadn't seen her in five years. Today was a full very surprising day. I hope found to find more old friends to know about something about them :) (it's difficult to keep the original meaning of this sentence without it sounding odd. I would suggest saying "and catch up with them" which means something similar).
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Today I went to the gym at two o'clock. It was empty. I enjoyed it because I could use all the machines and nobody would disturb me.
When I was finished, I bought a bottle of water and went back home.
Later I went to the market to buy some vegetables. Here I met my old friend from school. She was with her family. Since I hadn't seen her for five years, I was very surprised.
I hope I would be able to find more friends from the past and get to know what they have been doing.
When I was finished, I bought a bottle of water and went back home.
Later I went to the market to buy some vegetables. Here I met my old friend from school. She was with her family. Since I hadn't seen her for five years, I was very surprised.
I hope I would be able to find more friends from the past and get to know what they have been doing.
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How was my day?
Today I went to the gym at two o'clock. It was empty. I enjoyed it because I could use all the machines and nobody disturbED me.When I finished I bought a bottle of water and came back home.
Later I went to the market to buy some vegetables. Here I encountered [/ met] an old friend from school. She was going [shopping (using a compliment here would make it sound more natural)] with her family. I haven't seen her for 5 years. This day was a day full of surprises.
I hope to meet other old pals of mine and learn how they are doing :)
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