Saxophones and stories at school
Nowadays, education is a vital issue to discuss about. It has been debated whether young people should keep receiving history and music classes at secondary schools. The aim of this essay is to analyse why both subjects should continue to be taught.
On the one hand, history has always been a vital part of every curriculum. It is essential that young people know the history of their country, in order to help them become responsible citizens. It is clear that every country must remember its origins, so its inhabitants can avoid making the same mistakes that brought pain and suffer in the past.
On the other hand, music is considered an useless subject, since our society tends to focus on more productive fields such as technology and economy. However, music allows kids and teenagers to develop their creativity and strengthen their selfesteem. This is why I strongly believe that this subject is crucial to the development of young people.
For these reasons, I consider these two subjects deserve to be taken into consideration before modifying the current education plans at our secondary schools. If we only focus on subjects which we consider useful to our economy, we will be putting into risk the future of our students. This is what we need to keep in mind when talking about how our schools can help us design a better future.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 6
1
Saxophones and stories at school
Nowadays, education is a vital issue to discuss about. It has been debated whether young people should keep receiving history and music classes at secondary schools. The aim of this essay is to analyse why both subjects should continue to be taught.On the one hand, history has always been a vital part of every curriculum. It is essential that young people know the history of their country, in order to help them become responsible citizens. It is clear that every country must remember its origins, so its inhabitants can avoid making the same mistakes that brought pain and suffering in the past.
On the other hand, music is considered a useless subject, since our society tends to focus on more productive fields such as technology and economics. However, music allows kids and teenagers to develop their creativity and strengthen their self-esteem. This is why I strongly believe that this subject is crucial to the development of young people.
For these reasons, I consider these two subjects deserve to be taken into consideration before modifying the current educational curriculum in our secondary schools. If we only focus on subjects which we consider useful to our economy, we will be putting the future of our students at risk. This is what we need to keep in mind when talking about how our schools can help us design a better future.
I hope my changes have helped. This is a very interesting topic to explore.
Kara
1
Saxophones and stories at school
Nowadays, education is a vital issue to discuss about. It has been debated whether young people should keep receiving history and music classes at secondary schools. The aim of this essay is to analyse why both subjects should continue to be taught.On the one hand, history has always been a vital part of every curriculum. It is essential that young people know the history of their country, in order to help them become responsible citizens. It is clear that every country must remember its origins, so its inhabitants can avoid making the same mistakes that brought pain and suffer (suffering) in the past.
On the other hand, music is considered an useless subject, since our society tends to focus on more productive fields such as technology and economy (economics). However, music allows kids and teenagers to develop their creativity and strengthen their self-esteem. This is why I strongly believe that this subject is crucial to the development of young people.
For these reasons, I consider these two subjects deserve to be taken into (deserving of more consideration) consideration before modifying the current education plans at (of) our secondary schools. If we only focus on subjects which we consider useful to our economy, we will be putting into (at) risk the future of our students. This is what we need to keep in mind when talking about how our schools can help us design a better future.
Hope that helps Roberto! Let me know if you have any questions!
Mark
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
