Who I am?
Hello everyone! I would like to introduce myself.
I'm Patricia and it is the first time I write here. I'm a spanish girl of 27 years old. My english never was good,for this reason my boyfriend and me decided to go abroad. At present we are living in Ireland and he's working at the University as research assistant. On the other hand I was working for five months in a creche (kindergarten), however I needed to make the decision of go back Spain. Now I have decided to return again and I'm looking for other job. I hope to find something soon!:)
I'm glad to be here because it's a good opportunity to improve my english. Moreover I always thought that this experience would help me to meet new people and new places. Also to know new traditions,costums,dances,typical foods...it's so amazing!
I'm looking forward to improving my english because I don't understand nothing the Irish people :(
If someone read my text thank you for your time...I will thankful you If you can help me with the mistakes :)
Good bye friends!
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Who I am?
I'm Patricia and it this is the first time I write have written here. I'm a spanish girl of 27 years old Spanish woman and I'm 27 years old. My english never was English was never good (,) so ,for this reason, my boyfriend and me I decided to go abroad. At present we are living in Ireland and he's working at the University a university as a research assistant.
I'm glad to be here because it's a good opportunity to improve my english English. Moreover I always thought that this experience would help me to meet new people and to see new places. Also to know experience new traditions, costums costumes, dances, typical foods...it's so amazing!
I'm looking forward to improving my english English because I don't understand
If someone read my text - thank you for your time...I will thankful you If would be thankful if you can could help me with the mistakes :)
Good bye friends!
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Who I am?
Hello everyone! I would like to introduce myself.I'm Patricia and it is my first time I write here. I'm a 27 year old Spanish girl. My English was never good, for this reason my boyfriend and I decided to go abroad. At present we are living in Ireland and he's working at the University as a research assistant. On the other hand I was working for five months in a creche (kindergarten), however I needed to make the decision to go back to Spain. Now I have decided to return again and I'm looking for another job. I hope to find something soon!:)
I'm glad to be here because it's a good opportunity to improve my English. Moreover I always thought that this experience would help me to meet new people and new places. Also to get to know new traditions, costumes, dances, typical foods...it's so amazing!
I'm looking forward to improving my English because I don't understand anything the Irish people say :(
If someone read my text thank you for your time...I will be thankful you If you can help me with the mistakes :)
Good bye friends!
Hello Patricia.
Actually there are very few mistakes in this text. I think you underestimate your ability!. Remember that the names of languages always begin with a capital letter and it is always "I" before a verb
Best wishes
Bob
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Hello everyone! I would like to introduce myself. I'm Patricia and it this is the my first time I write writing here. I'm a Spanish girl of 27 years old. Or: "I'm a 27 year old Spanish girl." My english never was was never good, and for this reason my boyfriend and me I decided to go abroad. At present we are living in Ireland and he's working at the university (you do not need to capitalize "university" unless you specify which one) as a research assistant. On the other hand Before, I was working for five months in a creche (kindergarten), however I needed to make made the decision of to go back to Spain. Now I have decided to return again and I'm looking for another job. I hope to find something soon!:) I'm glad to be here because it's a good opportunity to improve my English. Moreover I always thought that this experience would help me to meet new people and discover new places. Also to know learn about new traditions, customs, dances, typical foods...it's so amazing! I'm looking forward to improving my English because I don't understand anything about the Irish people :( If someone read my text thank you for your time...I will thankful be thankful if you If you can if you could help me with the mistakes :) Goodbye friends!
One more note: the correct form of your title is "Who am I?"
Overall, good job!
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Hello Patri,how are you?
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