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about life Hi everyone Today I´m going to write about life.Life is the most beatiful gift that you have for that reason you have to enjoy it.Sometimes while You are living you have to take important decisions such as: choose a couple,choose your work,to have childrens,etc.Sometimes life is unfair because You have to be able to handle difficult times such as: a parent dead,fights with someone,etc.I´m desagree with some people that takes the decision to suicide for example Chis Cornell and Chester Bennington those guys had a huge talent and interesting life but They took the decision to suicide.This kind of decisions are difficult but I think that You have to improve yourself in difficult times and You have to find support with your family. Thanks for all see you later and God bless you all

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This is really good, keep up the good job! Patrícia down here made some corrections, but most of them were about punctuation, which means you just need to pay more attention. Congrats!
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About Life  (Capitalize all main words in a title)

Hi everyone. Today I´m going to write about life.

Life is the most beautiful gift that you have. For that reason, you have to enjoy it. Sometimes while you are living, you have to make important decisions such as: choosing to be a couple, choosing your work, deciding to have childrens,etc. Sometimes life is unfair because you have to be able to handle difficult times, such as: a parent dead dying, fighting with someone, etc. I´m disagree with some people that makes the decision to commit suicide, for example Chris Cornell and Chester Bennington. Those guys had a huge talent and interesting lives but they took made the decision to commit suicide.This These kinds of decisions are difficult, but I think that you have to improve yourself in difficult times and you have to find support with from your family.


Thanks for all to everyone. See you later and God bless you all.

(Use a gerund when speaking about things {nouns}, Leave a space after a period and a comma.  "I" is the only pronoun we capitalize in the middle of a sentence.)

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Hi everyone
Today I´m going to write about life.Life is the most beatiful gift that you have and for that reason you have to enjoy it. Sometimes while you are living you have to make important decisions such as: choose a partner, choose your work, decide whether to have children, etc. Sometimes life is unfair because You have to be able to handle difficult times such as: the death of a parent, fights with someone, etc. I disagree  with some people that make the decision to commit suicide, for example, Chis Cornell and Chester Bennington, those guys had huge talent and interesting lives, but they made the decision to commit  suicide.This kind of decision is difficult, but I think that you have to improve yourself in difficult times and you have to find support with your family.
Thanks to all. See you later and God bless you all.

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