Choices After Graduation
Working for big-size companies always means the access to a lot of benefits, because they have mature system that can help their employees enjoy their work. But personally I think a job in a small company will be a better choice. One of the most important reasons is that people will have more opportunities there. When I was an intern in a small technique company, the tasks my manager assigned me to do include database, marketing, recruiting, and even dealing with the complaints of the customers. I have to say it was pretty exhausting, but later I found that I learned a lot from that job and grow up fast.
I'm learning English now. I would be appreciate it If someone can help to correct the article above.Thanks!
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Choices After Graduation
Working for big-size ( you can omit "size", it is assumed) companies always means the access to a lot of benefits, because they have "a "well-developed" or "an established" system which (smoother transition that "that" in this case") helps the (you use "their" again later, change to "the" to be less tedious")employees enjoy their work. But, personally, I think a job in a small company will be is a better choice. One of the most important reasons for this is that people will have more opportunities there. When I was an intern in a small technique (maybe you mean technology, you can also use "tech") company, my manager assigned me many tasks, including database, marketing, recruiting, and even dealing with the complaints of the customers. I have to say it was pretty exhausting, but later I found that I learned a lot from that job and grow grew (past tense) up fast.I'm learning English now. I would be appreciate (you can also say "I would be very appreciative if...") it If someone can help to correct the article above.Thanks!
Really well written! ^^
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Choices After Graduation
Working for big ('size' is implied) companies always means access to a lot of benefits, because they have established ('mature' can refer to people or perhaps food that ages, like Kim chi, cheese, wine, etc.) system that can help their employees enjoy their work. But personally I think a job in a small company will be a better choice. One of the most important reasons is that people will have more opportunities there. When I was an intern in a small tech company, the tasks my manager assigned me to do included (past tense) database management, marketing, recruiting, and even dealing with the complaints of the customers. I have to say it was pretty exhausting, but later I found that I learned a lot from that job and grew (past tense) up fast.I'm learning English now. I would appreciate it If someone can help to correct the article above.Thanks!
Very good indeed. :)
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