The first month of my college life .
Recently, I
have been busy participating in various kinds of school organization
s, including broadcasting and magazine organizations
(with 'recently' it is better to use the past imperfect tense with 'have')
I'll try my best to improve myself in this university.
('Enrich' is not usually a verb one does to oneself, so I changed it)
Although I don't like some classes, especially advanced mathematics ,I won't give up easily.
('Pretty' does not fit in this sentence. Sometimes 'pretty' can be an intensifier, like 好 in 好热, but this only works before 形容词)
Sometimes I miss my grandparents, sisters, and brothers a lot, so when I do, I usually look through their photographs .
(You used 'sometimes' and 'usually' in the same sentence - this is okay! but if you do, each 'time word' has to be part of a phrase that could be a complete sentence by itself.)
I love writing, which will be how I spend the majority of my free time, but I realize that I have no words to write down over time.
('Writing' is not equal to 'time', so we add this 'how' phrase in the middle. There is no grammar problem with the end of this sentence, but I am not sure what it means.)
I extremely scared of this situation, therefore I read as many books as I can these days to keep my enthusiasm for writing, open my mind, and practice my study skills, which are enormously important to me.
(more: 更多, many: 许多; the word 'enthusiasm' is usually used with the preposition 'for', and 'cogitation' is a very rare technical word from psychology, 'to open (one's) mind' is a common way to express this idea.)
In addition, I found a serious problem: that I spend a lot of time on my makeup.
('Making up' has so many different meanings, this sentence was not clear I guessed that your meaning was 妆化.)
faced with this situation , I really don't know how to deal with it .
(The phrase 'faced with' fits better if there is an action verb after the comma. Your sentence us fine and clear, but a simpler way would be to say 'I really don't know how to deal with this situation.')
I hope I can improve my efficiency in all aspects to adjust to college life better !
